In case you don't like the 2xLPL + 6xML version... _ Good alpha, good speed, good survivability, good hitboxes, good armor values so you can shield properly between alphas. Lack of JJ and TC1 are the biggest cons, but it seems a very solid build.
You could drop the head ML for a TC1. With the heat back, you could swap to ERMLs and make it more of a longer poke.