My first pass on These mechs ran with Omnis because. I have run this once so far with limited success, but it should play something like a heavier Viper with the MGs.
Interesting concept for a high-DPS brawler. With the speed on these things, it could definitely work quite well. Here's a redesign with some minor tweaks. Dropped the Artemis, went with 2 SRM4 instead of a single SRM6, and picked up an extra half-ton of ammo with the exchange.
So I had switched over to FaIc's version, but I've found that I wasn't really making use of the LMGs range, so I shortened them up to MGs. Then I decided to go a step forward an use ERSLs and 2SRM6As again. The result is a higher sustainable DPS and a bigger alpha to boot. The trade off was some range, but I wasn't really making use of that.